This is absolutely amazing!
Myself, living in the countryside, listening to this song and reading this piece of diary(if could call it that) makes my soul peacefull!
When it gets to song itself, it is astonishing well made! I must admit that I can not give feedbak on how to improve the song!
Thank you so much for this upload!
God bless you!
Thank you! I appreciate your reviewing of my song, and may God bless you as well!
Hmm, very good! Really love the track, both tune/tunes and the beat/drums! :)
- The synths on the "Verses" Are way to loud compared to the kick
- And why did you remove the synth on the end, you should have had them to the end...
8.5 ,But only if you change theese things :P
Keep upp the great work!! :)
Amazed by this song!!! :)
I did really enjoy this!
At first, when I heard the pad and the synth, I though that this would be one of those song that begins great but ends upp bad becouse of the perc and the bad EQ but that all changen at 0.29 :)
Ok, so why 8(80)/10? Well first i thought that some of the synths are to loud compared to the loop/s. Second, there is no rom for relaxasion: I kinda missed an full steady qlimax or anti-qlimax in the middle of the song that didn't change in seconds. Also, For a 10/10 the tune had to be a bit more tasty(Not that it isn't!)
What i really liked about the song is all the tention, both in synths and build-ups. Espesially liked the part from 3:21- 3:48! :) Also, just love the loop that arrives at 0:29! Really made the song whole! :)
Don't take this to judging. Really wrote this so that you can make this magnificent song into a perfect song:D
8,88/10(clicked 9/10 just to be nice and don't pull the avreage score to much down).
Keep up the awesome work!!!
gotta say that is haven't heard something that is this good on NG for a long time...
The only thing that I can "complain" about must be the qlimax at 5:41, the main synth is a bit too loud and also the anti-qlimax comes a bit to roughly on. Really love the percussion and the tune is just perfect! Love it when the beat arrives at 3:57. Really like the flow through the song. It is definitely one of the best her on NG!
Keep on the great work!
Hope you uppload the full verion when your finished with it:)
Thanks a bunch man!
i really appreciate it :)
just as i tought, im gonna lower the main synth volume when im workin at it :)
and ofcourse a BIG thaaankkss for faving it :)
First I would like to say that you've done a good and creative job!
Kinda remind me on some 2D, 1 button game, but ofc. in a good way:)
I will give you some tips to improvement:
-Turn the bass drum up a little.
-Maybe add some non-melodic parts with only bass(Which also doesn't change
pitch), bass drum and the perc/loop, and perhaps a dry pluck synth with some
-Btw, beautiful piano in the beginning and awesome sweep ups/down!
(I'm saying all this just help you get it better than it already is) :P
And, yeah I did enjoy listening:)
Great job! :D
This is great, but...
Hi, Imn! :)
This is, and will always be a great song, but It's unfortunately not perfect...
This is why:
-The tune is, to be honest, a bit boring.
And so is the climax. It's to less of interesting(but mostly, that is ofc. because of the tune.
-A tip on the anti-climax(2:03). Add a baseline or a very silent pad. Maybe also a sweep-down.
-Also some of the drums a to high and a couple of them doesn't fit at all in the song.
The thing's that on the other side is very positive on/in the song:
-The bassdrum did fit perfect and made a extra touch!
-Love the lead that comes in on 1:09, it sounds really awesome!
-Great hihat(and loop) that comes in on 0:55.
Hope you don't find this to criticising. Only doing it to help you cause I can hear that you've got a great potential! :D
I'm giving it 8/10 and a 5/5:)!
Great jobb! Well done!
Keep up the great work!
Great genre, great song!
Hi xKore and Nechura!
This could easily top the best of week songs!
It's actually so good!
There isn't very much that I can say that would improve the song, but there's one thing though:
-The kick. It could have been a bit more powerful and contain a bit more "pow". It would be that extra touch.
Btw, Really love the equalising! It definitely makes it more interesting!
Glad to hear some real house again, that don't just mess up the genre!
What program did you use?
5/5 9/10 favd! :D
Keep up the awsone work!
Plz, make more collabs! :)
-Essence of trance-
Cool, weird and totally awsesome!
Hi, DJ S.H. :)
First I must say that this is so bizarre, but so incredible creative and one of a kind(In a very positive way ofc.).
I really like what I hear, though it may be a bit to weird for me...
The song is very powerful and full of soul! :)
Haven't got any complains about it!
Keep up the great work! :D
9/10(Because its not my taste...) 5/5!
Finaly, some real trance!
After 5 seconds, this song really took me away! I really can't wait for this song to be finished!
If there should be anything at all to complain about, it must be the clap. A hint:
Try to add another clap, reverse it and add it right after the clap that already is. also reverbe it a bit.
Except from that... I will say that this is on it's way to a perfect trance song!
If i may ask, what program do you use?
Btw. Really love the bass :)
Really a masterpiece! :D
Fruity Loops 9 XXL :D
hmm... cool:) Love the bass:) Great bassdrum, i like itXD
Btw, this isn't techno, but trance...
keep up the good work, bro:)
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