Thank you!
This is absolutely amazing!
Myself, living in the countryside, listening to this song and reading this piece of diary(if could call it that) makes my soul peacefull!
When it gets to song itself, it is astonishing well made! I must admit that I can not give feedbak on how to improve the song!
Thank you so much for this upload!
God bless you!
Sincerely
-EOT
Thank you! I appreciate your reviewing of my song, and may God bless you as well!
great!
Very nice!
gotta say that is haven't heard something that is this good on NG for a long time...
The only thing that I can "complain" about must be the qlimax at 5:41, the main synth is a bit too loud and also the anti-qlimax comes a bit to roughly on. Really love the percussion and the tune is just perfect! Love it when the beat arrives at 3:57. Really like the flow through the song. It is definitely one of the best her on NG!
Keep on the great work!
Hope you uppload the full verion when your finished with it:)
9/10
5/5
faved!
-EOT
Thanks a bunch man!
i really appreciate it :)
just as i tought, im gonna lower the main synth volume when im workin at it :)
and ofcourse a BIG thaaankkss for faving it :)
Cheers.
Finaly, some real trance!
After 5 seconds, this song really took me away! I really can't wait for this song to be finished!
If there should be anything at all to complain about, it must be the clap. A hint:
Try to add another clap, reverse it and add it right after the clap that already is. also reverbe it a bit.
Except from that... I will say that this is on it's way to a perfect trance song!
If i may ask, what program do you use?
Btw. Really love the bass :)
Really a masterpiece! :D
-EssenceOfTrance-
nice:)
hmm... cool:) Love the bass:) Great bassdrum, i like itXD
Btw, this isn't techno, but trance...
keep up the good work, bro:)
-EssenceOfTrance-
ty :P
Time to jump! :)
Wow, just wow!
Incredible! I really loved it, it has great tempo and great synths and great drums!
I don't think there's so much to complain about, but if there should be anything, it would be the ending: Personally i just love to hear intros and outros on hardstyle songs, and if you just make the outro maybe just a half minute or something longer, I would at least say yes:)
Btw, what program do you use and what's you main VSTi's? :)
Keep up the great work!
5/5 9,9/10
-EssenceOfTrance-
thx, I used sylenth and junglist
Hmmmm, actually not so bad, more like good:)
Hi, Tolgus! I'm very glad you decided to submit on NG. I can promise you that it's worth it! :) Since this is your first submition, I will give you a very criticising review. Well, only so it would help you getting better. Btw. I hear that you have a great potensial to get very good! :D
First thing i would criticise is that the tune is kind of boring in the length, though some of the synths helps the tune.
The climax arrives to fast. It's like a snowball: suddenly it's not here and suddenly it is. You should try to make a longer and more exciting build up. 2nd time the climax is it just stops out of nowhere including the song. make an outro to the song. Try also to use a crash or something on the climax.
The bassdrum is way to low and unpowerfull. Also use a banging bass on the cilmax(between the bassdrum).
A big suggestion: Turn the tempo down to at least 140 bmp.
The song isn't so bad and if you fix on some of the sings i just wrote, it could get much better.
Hope you didn't find the review to much criticising...
keep up the good work! :)
Just keep producing and making songs and you'll get very good! :D
-EssenceOfTrance-
Thanks. Yeah, i knew something was wrong and it needed a lot of work, but my interest in it kind of died. Always like that. But, on a next one i'll try to work on those points. Thanks for the review.
Great song... though there is something...
This is actually very good! There is some few things that I can complain about:
The bass should be a bit more powerful and much more clear, ofc. it's not a bad bass you've found, just giving a very constructive(and citicising) tip.
I personally think the melody is a little boring and not so exiting, but that meaning is
up to each person... The equalising is very good, and the main beat is awsome.
The song contains a very nice and beautiful flow, which is very impressive.
Great main synth:)
Over all I think the track is, as I said, very good! :D
Hope you don't find my review to criticising...
Well done!
Keep up the great work!
-EssenceOfTrance-
hmm, interesting!
relaxing, my first word:)
I will give you a criticising review, because I know you'll make it big!!!
First I want to say that this is one of the best of the NG trance song's. It's classic and very powerful!
If you cut the melody into 16 pieces... Now the 8th and the 16th piece is a little bit wrong for the whole tune, it sounded like you just added a tune to finnish the main tune..., hope you understand what I am trying to say.
00:14 was a bit to much changing. If you'd had a intro with the kick and bass and so on build up to full beat without main pad and piano after 00:14, it would be more interesting and people would be more interested in hearing more. It would also sound more professional and even better.
1:18-1:50 was a bit destroying... It was boring. Though 1:50-2:18 was heavenly!
Great work else.
I don't have so much to complain about, which shows that this song is absolutely on it's way to a perfect trance song!
It sounds very professional.
You really got the talent! :)
Keep up the great work!
-EssenceOfTrance-
Hey!
Thank you very much for the detailed and constructive comment! To be honest I'm not really getting what you want to tell me about the melody thing... but I'll dig it and check it out more deeper.
About the beginning - I think you are right with that. Next time I'll keep that in mind. In case of trance music my biggest problems are build ups and secondary tracks that make the connection between the main tunes.
And that's the problem you mention between 1:18 - 1:50. I wanted to make a small build up to make the "ground" for the soft tune but it looks like I had to make a different approach next time.
I'm glad that you liked the whole track and I guess you liked the second half of the track (after the slower part) and you think it sounds professional!
Greetings and wishing you a Merry Christmas!
Gregory
Hmm...Interesting
This is quit good! Great piano btw:) Its a bit short for a trance song, but who cares about that, right:P When I listen to the song, feel like it miss a less pumping "slow down/relaxing point" except the end and beginning ofc. But since the song is so short, it doesn't make so importent. Still, Great song!:D
-essenceoftrance-
Yeah, I don't really have an anti-climax. This is more trancecore than trance, but there's no trancecore genre on NG. :P Thanks!
great!
house have never been a favorite genre for me, but you're beginning to turn that interest the whole other way :) The song is very chilly:D(If i may ask) What program do you use to make your songs and whats your main VSTi's? XD :D
Keep up the great work!
-EssenceofTrance-
I only use Reason and the basic soundpacks that come with it. I'm a "work with what I've got" kinda guy. I don't buy anything new until I've completely exhausted what I've already got and know absolutely everything about it. :d
Having said that, I'll soon be looking to purchase Propellerhead's latest software, Record, which will finally allow me to start using live audio in my songs. Can't wait to start using vocals and ambient effects in my pieces. :)
Not only that but Record has all these mastering features right on board so right off the bat my quality's going to take a huge leap up as well. :d If I wasn't busy this weekend I'd be out buying it right now, tbh! >_< hehe.
thanks for the kind words, essence. :)
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